Psalm 1: Alliterative Paraphrase
I was enjoying the Old English-style poem that I wrote for my Futhark experiment, and I wanted to do something else in the same style. I happened to be skimming through a book I have on early English Christian poetry, and came across a passage in which the author paraphrased some scripture. I thought that might be a very nice subject. After all, the Psalms are poems, translated into English; why not paraphrase them in such a way as to fit them into an English poetic form? So that's what I did with the first Psalm.
In case you're not familiar with the style, Old English alliterative verse has 4 accented syllables in a line, with a break in the middle, and at least 2 of the accented syllables should alliterate (start with the same sound), preferably at least one from each half. The accented syllable does not have to be the first syllable in the word. All vowels are considered to alliterate with one another.
Here is the result:
Psalm 1
Happy is he who heeds not the heathen
nor stands with sinners, nor sits with the scornful;
but he delights himself in the law of the Lord,
and meditates on His word morning and night.
He shall be like a tree, tall and verdant,
Planted in peace by the purest of rivers,
bearing succulent fruit season by season;
whose leaf shall not wither nor waste away,
but all his plans shall prosper in plenitude.
Woe to the wicked; they but wish it were so;
like chaff in the wind, they'll be whisked away.
Thus the unjust will not escape judgment,
Nor will sinners stand in the assembly of saints.
For the Lord watches the way of the righteous,
but the way of the wicked will be laid to waste.
Comments
so great is His love for those who fear Him;
so far has He removed our transgressions from us.
so the Lord has compassion on those who fear Him;
He remembers that we are dust.